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Suzanne Dunaway's avatar

Oh, tears. What a lovley moment in your lives...and yes, kindness does exist if a bit more difficult to find in this I, me, my world. Beautiful piece. I love these short affecting scenes you write, like falling past my window but easy to catch.

scott eckersley's avatar

Thanks, Tony, as usual you are a master story teller. Just amazing.

Suellen Mayfield's avatar

I appreciated the emotional twists in such a short piece! Very moving.

Writing Unchained's avatar

Good observation...

Ron Arias's avatar

Touching trip. Brought back memories of my Peace Corps time in the Cuzco area in the mid-60s. All dirt, no asphalt roads, so lots of dust.